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例1：In two weeks，the fry will grow up to two inches long． 解析：原句过于简单，可以增加鱼苗和前一阶段的比较。
改正：In two weeks, the fry will grow up to two inches long, more than twice longer than it was when hatched．在两周时间内，鱼苗长到了两英寸，比刚孵化时长两倍还要多。
例2：In the second step，workers will rinse bottle glass of any colour． 解析：原句过于简单，可以增加一点说明，譬如说关于第二阶段产生的变化和结果。
改正：In the second step，workers will rinse bottle glass of any colour．While the glass in the first phase is possibly life-threatening and contaminated，the glass is now hygeian and ready for the next stage of the recycling process．大意：在第二步，工作人员会清洗各种颜色的玻璃。第一阶段的玻璃可能是危害健康并被污染的，而这一阶段的玻璃是卫生的，可以为循环过程的下一步做准备。
例3：In the second phase of urban sprawl，land developers start to build a residential area．解析：原句过于简单，可以增加一点说明，譬如说关于第二阶段的功能和目的。
改正： In the second phase of urban sprawl，land developers start to build a residential area．It is to serve the needs of those people working in those office blocks and factories built in the first phase．大意：
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在城市扩张的第二阶段，土地开发商开始建造居民区。这是为了满足在第一阶段所建办公楼和工厂里工作的人们的需要。
参看考官范文，研习遣词造句
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.
There are four main stages in the production of plastic paper clips from this small factory. Two of these stages involve actual preparation of the clips, while the other two consist of quality control before the clips are sent out from the factory to the retailers to be sold to the public.
To begin with, molten plastic is poured into three different moulds depending
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on the colour required; the colours are red, blue and yellow. Once these clips emerge from the moulds, a quality control machine checks them for strength. Unsatisfactory clips are rejected. In the third stage in the process the clips are stored by hand into two groups, mixed and single colours. When this stage is complete the groups are checked a second time to ensure that the colour mixtures are divided correctly into single colours and mixed colour batches. Finally, the clips are packed and dispatched to the markets. (152 words)
参看考官范文，研习遣词造句
20140308写作题目
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Task 1 流程图 Three methods to recruit new employees.
Method 1 Method 2
Advertisement within company Advertisement in the press
Shortlist Shortlist
Interviews test
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Interview Job
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offer
Method 3
External recruitment agency
Advertisement by agency search by headhunter
Shortlist presented to employer
Interviews
Job offer
写作指导：流程图首先要仔细读图，理解好图表表达的内容。其次，注意文章的时态
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