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【1】U.PY彭宇-雅思写作-权威整理(2)

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MATERIAL FOR IELTS-WRITING COURSE FOR IELTS

You should write at least 150 words.

In this analysis above there are three pie charts, the first of which is headed

?World Spending?, the second is ?World Population? and the third is ?Consumption of Resources.?

In the first chart we can see that people spend most of their income (24%) on food. In some countries this percentage would obviously be much higher. Transport and then housing are the next major expenses at 18% and 12% respectively. Only 6% of income is spent on clothing.

In the second chart entitled ?World Population?, it is not surprising to find that 57% of people live in Asia. In fact China and India are two of the most populated countries in the world and they are both situated on this continent. Europe and the Americans account for nearly 30% of the total, whilst 10% of

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people live in Africa.

Finally, the third chart reveals that the USA and Europe consume a huge 60% of the world?s resource.

To sum up, the major expenditure is on food, the population figures are the highest for Asia and the major consumers are the USA and Europe. (182 words)

参看考官范文,研习遣词造句

The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and that coal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand, there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years.

Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest

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source of energy, increasing its proportion to 27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%, decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of America?s energy ten years later. There was no change in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy used. Nuclear power boasts the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, which is twice as much as that of the 1980s. (152 words)

第二篇 曲线图[柱状图] 写作要点: 1.曲线图和柱状图都是动态图,解题的切入点在于描述趋势。

2.在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰,同时也方便考官阅卷。接下来再分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为分类的依据。

3.趋势说明。即,对曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升、下降、波动、持平。以时间为比较基础的应抓住“变化”:上升、下降、或是波动。其中对两个或两个以上的变量进行描述时应在此基础上进行比较,如果变量多于两个,应进行分类或有侧重的比较。

4.极点说明。即对图表中最高的、最低的点单独进行说明。 5.交点说明。即对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明。

6.不要不做任何说明就机械地导入数据,这不符合雅思的考试目的。 动词—九大运动趋势 第 8 页 共 85 页 MATERIAL FOR IELTS ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

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1.表示向上:increase,rise,improve,grow,ascend,mount, go up,climb, take off, jump,shoot up暴涨,soar, skyrocket

2.表示上升后保持平稳:flatten out(下降或升高后变平), level off 举例:人口上升后保持平稳:the number of population mounted to 2M and leveled off.

3.表示复苏(下降后再上升):recover,bounce back

举例:人口下降后复苏:the number of population decreased and recovered. 4.表示下降:decrease,decline,descend,drop, fall,go down,come down,collapse, crash, fall off, slump, plummet垂直, plunge突然, slide,shrink, dwindle, diminish

5.表示下降后保持平稳:bottom out,flatten out(下降或升高后变平) 举例:人口下降后保持平稳:the number of population decreased and bottomed out.

6.表示稳定或水平:remain steady/constant,stay stable, stabilize,flatten out(下降或升高后变平), level off, stay at the same level, be similar to, there is little/hardly any/no change

举例: the number of population stayed stable/ the number of population remained steady.

7.表示波动:fluctuate,fluctuation

8.表示在底部:reach a low point,bottom out,reach the bottom 9.表示在顶部:reach a peak,peak,top out,reach the highest point/ the top/ the summit/ the most,peak in/at,reach the zenith

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举例:人口到达了顶峰:the number of population peaked/ reached its summit/ reached its zenith.

经典例句:

remain steady/ stay stable/ level off/ bottom out/ peak/reach

its peak/ reach its zenith后面需要使用的是at.

1.人口在500万上保持平稳: The number of population remained

steady at 5 million.

2. 人口在800万时到达了顶峰: The number of population peaked at

8 million.

3. 下降后,人口在400万保持平稳:After decreasing, the number of

population bottomed out at 4 million.

4. 上升后,人口在700万保持平稳: After mounting, the number of

population leveled off at 7 million.

上升/下降后面使用to(到)和by(了)

1. 人口下降到200万: number of population decreased to 2 million. 2. 人口下降了200万: number of population decreased by 2 million. 3. 人口上升到1000万: number of population increased to 10

million.

4. 人口上升了500万: number of population increased by 5 million. recover的后面大家需要使用的是from

人口在200万时开始复苏: The number of population recovered from

2 million.

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