高考英语书面表达评分标准(3)

副词性从句；非谓语类；特殊句式类（倒装句、强调句等）

1. The environment will not improve until everybody takes care of it. Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.

2.My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle. I think he is a genius. My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.

3.Yao Ming was born in Shanghai. He has been playing for Huston Rockets .He was injured severely last season. Born in Shanghai, Yao Ming who has been playing for Huston Rockets was injured severely last season.

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English Advisor Wanted

Our Students’ Union needs an English student to be our advisor. There are some requirements as follows:

First, your mother language must be English, if you can speak Chinese well, you will take an advantage of others. Second, your work is to solve English problems, organize English activities.

Third, you must work 4 hours every week. And we can talk face to face about pay.

Last but not least, if you are interested in the work, you can call me Tel: 13011223344

I’m looking forward to your reply.

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English Advisor Wanted

The Students’ Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English, answering their question, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting big topics.

The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

If you are interested in, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

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