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附4：（1）2012年作文亮点句式：

1. I feel greatly honored to be here to share my experience.

2. I’m more than happy to have this chance to give you some advice on learning English.

3. It is a great privilege to have the chance to share my ideas.

4. It is widely acknowledged that participating in some English activities.

5. There is no denying that keeping a diary every day is necessary to learn English well.

6. English is becoming increasingly important.

7. You can’t emphasize the importance of surfing the website to find some articles.

8. So important is it that we take immediate action.

9. When it comes to learning English, I attach great importance to joining in an English corner.

10. Just as the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

11. My experience is listed as follows.

12. I often participate in English corner, from which I benefit a lot.

13. We can write down what we did.

14. What really counts/matters is that you should practice writing by keeping diaries.

15. The reason why I think highly of it is that it really does good to learning English.

16. Set your mind into it, and you’ll make it.

17. Not only can we improve our oral English but also we can make more friends.

附4：（2）根据考生的写作情况，我特地模写了一篇范文，如下：

As a senior three student, I attach great importance to English. In order to learn it well, apart

from English class, I took an active part in many after-class English activities, such as English

corner, which benefits me a lot. In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same

interest with me and learn English well. Additionally, sometimes, some foreigners are glad to join

us. By communicating with them, my oral English improved a lot. Furthermore, I find it useful to

keep English diaries. I keep on doing it these years and it really does good to my English. As a

saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make more progress.

Last but not least, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement.

Through these websites, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. What’s more,

I can train my reading skills, which play an important part in my study process.

All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off.

附4：（3）根据考生的出错情况，我特地模写了一篇漏洞百出的作文，如下：

My experiences of learn English

Hellow, I is Li Hu. My English is very well. I very like it. I am very pleasure to has this

change to shell my advices of learn English. Here are my advices as following.

The first, at weekend, I oftenly join a English activity calling “English club”. At there, I

could communication with many foreigner to practice my English spoken and too make more new

friends.

The second, I write day note, from where I set down a series of facts that I experienced in the

day. By it, I can train my write skills, and it can improve.

The last but not the least, I see EnjoyReading everyday, a website where I can read much

passages and articles.

As far as I’m concern, you can learn English good if you follow my advice.

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