2013年中考作文采样
A档作文(18-20)
19=8+7+4 (样卷)
Although our parents are trying their best to prevent us from difficulties, teenagers have to learn how to protect ourselves. I remember once, I was doing shopping by myself. And a robbery happened. I was frightened. But I knew that only by calming down can I got through it. So I hid under a shelf and called the police. A few minutes later, the policemen rushed into the store and saved everyone. That was an extremely unforgetful experience in my life. Sometimes life gets in the way and dangerous things are all over the world. Learning how to protect myself is very essential. 19=7+8+4 (样卷)
Accidents always happen in our daily life. All we have to do is to learn how to protect ourselves. For example, when there is an earthquake, the first thing you ought to do is to open the door and hide under a desk or a bed calmly.
Often the first shake will last for a few minutes. You mustn’t go out at this time. When it stops, remember to cover your head with a hard object and run out of the building as fast as you can. If you are luckily buried in the building, keep yourself awake and wait for help. In brief, we should calm down first when accidents happen. I believe if we can follow
the right instructions, nothing can hurt us.
B档作文(13.5-17.5)
16=8+7+1
What is the most precious thing for us? What is the perfect present our parents give us? Life!
One day, on my way home, I always felt sth. strange beside me——a man who wore a black shirt was following me for a long time, and he made me a bit nervous because I noticed that there was a knife in his hand. How awful! I tried to calm down and walk more fast. At the same time, I called to the police. My voice was quiet in order to make sure the man didn’t hear what I said. Finally, the man was caught and he was a thief.
Life is wonderful, all in all, we should learn how to protect ourselves and enjoy the time. 14=7+7+0 (样卷)
In my life, I may sometimes meet some bad people. So how to protect myself is very important. First, don’t argue with them. If I do that it only can make them feel angry. I should calm down and talk with them. Next, if they want money, I just give them. Then I can use phone to ask police for help. Finally, if I am in danger, I should run into someplace with many people. They can help me. Protecting myself is an important skill. So I will learn more about it to prevent from danger.
C档作文(8.5-13) 13= 8+5+0 (样卷)
Personally speaking, learning protect myself is too important. If someone robs my bag and runs away, I should ask policeman for help. If I meet fire, I should keep calm down in danger. I should call “119” and run__ the safe entrance for leave. And then I can know doing everything I must be careful. It is important for us to protect ourselves in danger.
11=6+5.5+0
Everyone has dangerous. So we must learn how to protect ourselves. If I am in danger I will ask others for help. Such as policemen and I will shout. “Help, Help” . Then there are many people will help me. And I will read many books for “ How to protect myself” or I will learn it in the computer. In one word, I will save me by myself.
D档作文(4.5-8) 7=5+2+0
Nowadays, we are already become a teenager. So we should protect ourself indoor and outdoor. In summer I usually go to swimming with my friends. With them I will be safe. If I am swimming, I will care of my body. __I feel bad and I will stop. Once time I am so tired that I can move my
legs but no one around __me so I should as possible as hode. Finally I am be safe. So in life we should learn how to protect ourself with others.
好词好句
To begin with,… To put it briefly,…
Apart from that, we shouldn’t say too many words so that we can save energy.
Effective actions should be taken when an earthquake happens. Wait for the proper moment to run away
To ask warm-hearted people to reach public places
I think I should not only protect myself in real life, but also on the Internet.
I should keep calm. In this case, not only can I protect myself but also I can think over the plan to solve it. Nothing can take the place of safety.
I must calm down and keep my mind clear if there’s a fire. If the situation is not too serious, I should…
A calm brain can help me think of some essential ways to escape. Life isn’t all roses.
A clear mind is better than a clever one.
Always prepare for a rainy day. Patience can be the bridge to safety. Life is the best treasure a person can possess.
实用的结构
地震(按照事情的发展并用理由支撑)
…If I happen to meet the earthquake, I will calm down first. The attitude is the most important thing when we are in danger. Then I will hide under the hard place and do not come out because many dangerous things will fall down and hurt you. When I make sure that I’m safe, I will ask someone for help… 骗子电话
If… receive a phone call, … calm down first and … instead of believing him. Besides, if he pretends to…, I’ll ask parents for help to make sure whether… or not.
All in all, if I have a clear mind, protect… from… 见网友(用几个简单的连接词组织)
Thanks to the development of technology, Internet is widely used among teenagers. However, it may bring a lot of problems.
On one hand, we can’t tell strangers our … we may be found easily, and we’ re more likely to be in danger…
On the other hand, we mustn’t meet those friends we are not familiar to
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