雅思写作全球化类范文(3)

修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。 Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily?? Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。 Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things?? Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。

“见官死”开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me??

“见官死”开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。

“见官死”开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。 [NextPage]

“见官死”开头之六：过分简单没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it! “见官死”开头之七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。 “见官死”开头之八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。 “见官死”开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”??

正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”??

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family? Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole??

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

“见官死”开头之十： 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

建筑风格

雅思作文高分范文及解析【pdf免费下载】

Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest， especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected， however， I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.

One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside， they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.

Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics， for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run， this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.

Of course， traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations， but at the same time， we don’t have to live in the past.

Ultimately， each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles， but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like. (264 words)

写作线索：首段，现代建筑必要;第二段，因为现代建筑的实用性和舒适性;第三段，代表城市现代化;第四段;让步，传统建筑的价值。末段总结。

文中第三段的观点不够有力。其实现代建筑的优点直接分实用性和舒适性两个段落来重点阐述即可。比如实用性，现代化都市人口密度比以前大，摩天大楼skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。 本文末句很有趣味，再仔细读读：After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(毕竟，如果我们不继续开发新建筑的风格，我们的下一代将不会知道我们这一代的历史是什么样)历史是相对的，对于我们的子孙来说，我们现在的现代化建筑将成为他们眼里的古代建筑。 先学习下面的词汇和短语，然后再重读范文，体会它们在文中的运用 词汇

emerge vi.显现出来 architecture n.建筑物 practical adj.实用的

user-friendly adj.用户友好的，方便用户使用的 stunning adj.足以使人晕倒的，极好的 admire v.赞美，钦佩，羡慕

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