2011年高考英语作文(2)

(六)二段写法

继2000年之后，本题第二段第9次考察图画的意义阐释段。首句一般可以点出图画主题，然后可以使用因果论证、举例论证、统计论证、正反论证等多种论证手段进行论证，切

忌套话不要太多，最好针对主题现场发挥一些句子。

(七)尾段写法

继1992年之后，提纲第三段第15次考察建议措施段，写成归纳结论亦可，只需总结自己的结论、或提出建议即可。尾句最好包装结尾、展望未来，使用倒装句、强调句、虚拟语

气、名人名言等精彩句型，给阅卷教师留下较好的印象，帮助自己赢得高分。

三、参考范文

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, supporting each other with their powerful hands, two handicapped adolescents are continuing their new journey on the ground. Crutches left behind, they have successfully cracked the hard nut of lameness which might have confused the majority of the disabled. The caption indicates, You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we ca

n travel all around.

Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to attract our attention to the issue of cooperation. According to a survey conducted among a group of people who were in the same college class 10 years ago, those who are ready to give their cooperation to others all become rich or managers of all field, while not a single young man having difficulty in getting along with their classmates becomes an executive or boss. Why those who are excellent in team work tend to be managers or own their own enterprise in their later life？ The answer seems self-evident. On the one hand, if you are competent in profession, but have difficulty in getting along with your colleagues and even your boss, you can hardly survive the corporation. On the other hand, your chances of success are much higher with wide circle of friends who are willing t

o cooperate with you to provide information and resources.

It is my view that, first of all, we can frequently use the drawings to enlighten the juvenile to learn to cooperate successfully with each other. On the other hand, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and team work are nearer to success. Just as John Adams, the second U.S. president quoted from the ancient Greek Aesop''s Fable

s, United we stand, divided we fall.

09模拟试题

第一篇

51. Directions:

Suppose Wang Ming, one of your friends, is ill. Write a letter of consolation. Your letter should include:

1) your purpose of writing this letter

2) your true feeling and best wishes

You should write about 100 words. Don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Hong” instead. You don’t need to write the address. (10 points)

Part B

52. Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the drawing

2) interpret its meaning and

3) give your own comments

You should write about 160 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

Section IIIWriting

答案

Part A

51.Sample Writing

Dear Wang Ming,

I feel awfully sorry indeed that you have been ill for a couple of days. I have learned from your roommate that you are recovering well and that you will go out of hospital within three days. I am really relieved to know this exciting news.

In the following few days I sincerely hope you should take a good rest, have an excellent state of mind, and follow the doctor’s advice strictly. Just take it easy and don’t worry about the study. I shall help you make up the content you have missed while you are in hospital. With the best wishes for your quick and complete recovery.

Yours ever

Li Hong

Part B

52. Sample Writing

As is vividly depicted in the drawing, a mother reminds her daughter to make some preparations for the interview. However, the daughter answers by saying that she is making up for it. It is apparent that she expects to impress the interviewer by her appearances, which is contrary to her mother’s. Simply designed as this drawing seems to be, the phenomenon it subtly indicates is pervasive in our community.

What the painter conveys is that currently folks, especially young girls, pay too much attention to their looks when hunting for jobs. There is an increasing cult for outer beauty but our individuals ignore the pursuit of inner beauty such as ability and knowledge.

A couple of reasons can account for this strange trend. To begin with, interviews have become important means for judging a qualified applicant. Interviewers will be influenced consciously or unconsciously by what interviewee look and wear. In addition, girls in great numbers tend to worship their appearances, convinced that beautiful features and dresses will help them succeed in their life. Some girls even go to have surgical operations to look prettier before graduation. Last but not the least, many beauty competitions give rise to the illusion that beautiful looks can help them become famous, successful and wealthy so easily.

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