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欢迎辞 I．Review:

1. in front of ， behind ,on the right/left of, in/on/to the north of ,newly-built, a sign of, show sb. Around, have the honor to do, 2. There is/lies/stands a park in the north of the school. (in /to/on the)north of our school is a park. 3. A building was built/has been /is being /will be… II.

1.（point to the picture , translate the following sentences） Now we are walking on the main road of our school. On the left side

of the road is our office building and behind it is the Zhixing building. There stands a newly-built art building and a lab building on the right.G0 straight ahead, and you will find a square. In the north of the square stands our old teaching, which was built in the 1980s.But it will be replaced by a new one, when it will be a sign of our school. The largest building is our new teaching building，which is called ZHIHE BUILDING. In the west of our school there are 3 flats.

Now look at the building which is being built in the south west. It will be a new flat for girls. To the north of it is a park. Oh, sorry, I forget to tell you where our dinning room is-north of the park. 2. Write down the key words.

3. Give students 5 minutes to make up sentences. 4. Read it aloud.

5. Ask 2 students to practice. III.按换为欢迎辞 开头语：

Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our school. I have the honor to show you around our school. 结束语(情感升华)

Such is our school, a good place for /to study (live in). We have the reason to believe that our school has a bright tomorrow.

IV. Write down. VI. Conclusion

1.写作顺序：空间、方位（介词）

2.易错点：大小写，介词，时态，检查要点： （动词，名称，短语）

3.亮点：句式变化，定从，省略倒装，情感升华（主人翁意识，地域情感，家乡情怀，自豪感） 4.注意纯粹地点描述与欢迎辞的区别

1. 常用词汇 come into one’s sight on the other side, in front of ,before, behind, in/to/on the north of ,stands ,there be ,line in be located in ，have a history of, cover an area of ,have a population of 2句型：there be ,被动语态,have the honor to do ,great changes have taken place, 3格式：欢迎辞

人物描写

1.常用词汇。Hard-working, energetic, active, determined, intelligent, fair, generous, kind, helpful, modest, confident, brave, honest, considerate, unselfish, devoted, educated, warm-hearted 2.常用句型

Look like, admire sb. Because, what impressed me most is that…, put in the first place, make great achievements/contributions, to be considerate to …is enjoyable, be ready to help others, such is …，not

a man to rest, interest oneself

环保：A句型：1 Used to 林、水beautiful with a river

running in front of it/ tree s surrounding it.

2.伐木建房 余树不多 3.水灾a heavy flood visited the village, only then did the villagers realized …4思考we should not develop at the cost of sacrificing the environment. 5植树 6.恢复after several years of effort, green trees can be seen everywhere.

B.污染1. As the world is getting more polluted, pollution brings

a serious problem. Where there are people, there is pollution. All the waste is polluting our surroundings.

Pollution has a bad influence on our life. The air is polluted by the smoke and fog coming out of the factory chimneys. Plants die for want of fresh air .and the fish are unfit to live. There is noise pollution made by cars and factories, etc, which hurts the ear. It is high time we did something about pollution .I suggest more trees be planted to keep the air fresh. W e should clean the water and makes use of the wastes and turn harm into good. By some common efforts, we will make a clean and beautiful environment for life and work.

2. Life today has many problems. One of the biggest is pollution.

Water pollution has made our rivers and lakes dirty. It kills our fish and pollutes our drinking water. Noise pollution makes us talk louder and makes us become angry and cross. Air pollution is the most serious kind of pollution. It is bad to living things in the world. We need to do a lot of things to fight pollution. Factories must clean their waste water before it is thrown away, and they must not blow dirty smoke into the air. We can not throw waste things on the ground. We can go to work by bus or with our friends in the same car. If there are few people driving cars on the road, there will be less pollution.

Rules are not enough .Everybody must help to fight pollution. It is everyone’s duty to work hard to achieve the goal.

2.现象报道介绍—现状分析（原因）----措施 地球变暖：The earth is getting warming. How does it come about? There is no doubt that it is human activity that has caused the global warming.(burning of fuels, greenhouse effects ,carbon dioxide) It may result in the rise of the sea level, storms ,floods, droughts ,the spread of diseases, the disappearance of species. Faced with the problem, what should we do to prevent it? After sever years effort, green trees can be seen everywhere. （a threaten to, to prevent such things happening again ）

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