高一英语短文改错单句解析(6)

(10) unless 改为 if，否则句意不通。

高考英语短文改错考点类析·并列连词 一、考点规律分析

短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and, but, or, so 等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。 二、真题单句归纳

(1) We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. (and 改为 but，因此处语意转折) (全国卷)

(2) I told Mother, Father, Sister, all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加 and，表示并列关系) (全国卷)

(3) It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it. (but 改为 and / so，此处表因果关系，并非转折关系) (北京春季卷)

(4) She was smiling but nodding at me. (but 改为 and，因此处并无转折之意) (全国卷)

(5) It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. (and 改为 or，a visitor 和 a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”)

(6) The food was expensive and the service was good. (and 改为 but，此处意义发生转折) (全国卷)

(7) I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games. (so 改为 and，表并列关系) (安徽春季卷)

(8) My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.(but 改为and，此处表示并列，而不是转折) (江苏卷)

(9) So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you… (So 改为 But，因为前后是转折关系) (年浙江卷) (10) Clever as she is, but she works very hard. (去掉but，因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词 as(=though 虽然)，千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响，而重复用连词) (福建卷)

(11) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.(but 改为and，因为 teach / play 与 watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系) (湖北卷) 三、模拟单句演练

(1) Do you want a bath at once, and shall I have mine first? (2) Are you going to clean your car before and after supper? (3) Hurry up, and you’ll be late for school. (4) She never said she was rich, and she was.

(5) Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success. (6) Everyone asked me to go, but I went. 【参考答案】

(1) and 改为 or，or 在此表选择。 (2) and 改为 or，or 在此表选择。

(3) and 改为 or，or 在此表示“要不然”、“否则”。

(4) and 改为 but，but 在此表示转折。句中的 she was 为 she was rich 之省略。 (5) so 改为 but，此处语意转折。 (6) but 改为 so，so 在此表示因果关系。 高考英语短文改错考点类析·缺词考点 一、考点规律分析

与多词错误的情形相似，漏词也主要涉及英语中一些“小”词，如冠词、介词、不定式符号、人称代词、动词 be等。具体说来，漏词错误可能涉及的问题有：不及物动词后接宾语时漏加必要的介词，在该带不定式符号to的地方漏加 to，在单数可数名词表示泛指意义时漏加必要的限定词(尤其是漏加不定冠词)，漏掉表特指的定冠词，漏掉被动语态中的助动词 be，漏加系表结构中的连系动词 be，漏加一些常用结构或表达中的介词(如漏掉 a lot of 中的 of，漏掉 because of 中的 of，漏掉 instead of 中的 of等)，漏掉某些从句的“引导词”(通常会导致意义不通)，等等。 二、真题单句归纳

(1) When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head. (head 前加 his，汉语可“摇头”，而按英语的习惯要说 shake one’s head) (全国卷)

(2) When I have free time I go a long walk. (go 后加 for，go for a walk 是习语) (全国卷)

(3) Charles said, “As soon I see a realy tall building, I want to climb it.（第一个I 前加 as，因为 as soon as 为引导时间状语从句的引导词）(全国卷)

(4) Good health is person’s most valuable possession. (person’s 前加 a，这里的 a 表泛指) (全国卷)

(5) The World Health Organization and other organizations are working improve health all over the world. (improve前加 to，to improve…为表目的的不定式短语) (全国卷)

(6) There is public library in every town in Britain. (public library 前加 a，因这里的 public library 是单数可数名词表泛指，故在其前用 a) (全国卷)

(7) In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加 as，因此处为as ... as 结构) (全国卷)

(8) …and let you know when the book you want has returned. (returned 之前加 been，因从句意上看，此处用被动语态) (全国卷)

(9) I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加 to，因为 want 后要接不定式) (全国卷)

(10) I told Mother, Father, Sister, all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加 and，表示并列关系) (全国卷)

(11) They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. (eager 前加were，因此处缺谓语动词) (全国卷)

(12) I’d like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country. (to 后加 be / become，因 would like 后接不定式，根据句意此处应补 be / become) (全国卷)

(13) What your favourite sport? (what 后加 is 或将 What 改为 What’s，此句缺谓语) (全国卷)

(14) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. (instead 后加 of，instead of 为复合介词，在此表示“而不是”) (全国卷)

(15) Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. (captain 前加冠词 the，captain 为特指) (全国

卷)

(16) I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing…(a lot 后加 of，因 a lot 不能直接修饰名词) (全国卷)

(17) I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. (wonderful 前加 a，该表达与 have a good time 类似，其中的 a 不可省) (北京春季卷)

(18) I’d like very much come but I had an examination on Monday morning. (come 前加 to，因为 would like 后接不定式) (北京春季卷)

(19) The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher talked to me. (English 前加 my，teacher 为单数可数名词，前面要限定词) (全国卷)

(20) In one class, I learned it rained.(it 前加why，why 在此表原因) (北京春季卷)

(21) But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加 to，此处为不定式作后置定语) (北京春季卷) (22) My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (make 前加 to，因为 to make… 在此用作目的状语，注意句型 do all one can to do sth) (全国卷)

(23) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(在 famous 前加 a，注意 mountain 是单数可数名词) (全国卷)

(24) It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. (we 前加 when，时间状语从句缺少连词引导) (全国卷)

(25) There will an important game next month. (will 后加be，此处缺谓语动词) (安徽春季卷)

(26) Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (Because 后加 of，因 so much viewing 相当于名词) (北京春季卷)

(27) One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加 it，showed 在此作及物动词，后面缺少宾语) (全国卷)

(28) When I was boy, the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. (boy 前加 a，因 boy 为可数名词) (江苏卷)

(29) You can find all kinds information in just a few minutes on the Internet. (kinds 后加 of。all kinds of 意为“各种各样的”) (广西卷)

(30) …discover an interest which can even last lifetime. (lifetime 前加 a，指人的一生是 a lifetime) (浙江卷) (31) She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house. (look 前加 to。因为“停下来去做某事”是 stop to do sth, 不定式作目的状语) (福建卷)

(32) Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. (fire 前加 the，因这是特指的一场火灾) (福建卷) (33) As we all left home at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life… (early 前加 an，at an early age 意为“在年幼时”) (天津卷)

(34) I often dream of a teacher. (a teacher 前加上 being 或 becoming，根据后文的内容看来，作者不是梦见老师，而是自己梦想“成为”一名教师) (湖北卷) 高考英语短文改错考点类析·多词考点 一、考点规律分析

多词错误主要涉及英语中一些“小”词，如冠词、介词、不定式符号、人称代词、动词 be、比较级more等。

具体说来，多词错误可能涉及的问题有：及物动词后接宾语时误加介词，在该用动词原形的地方误加不定式符号to，在物质名词、抽象名词、复数名词等表示泛指时误加定冠词，在一些可直接用作状语的短语前误加介词in, on, for 等，误加一些导致语义重复的小词(如two 与both连用，all 与whole 连用等)，在本身已是比较级的词前误加more，在不是从句的地方误加从句“引导词”，在一些习惯用语和固定表达中误加不该用的“小词”(如冠词、介词、副词等)，等等。 二、真题单句归纳

(1) David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (去掉 it，因它与其前的关系代词 which 语义重复) (全国卷)

(2) Some people read the books or watch television while others have sports. (去掉 the，因这里的 books 表泛指，不表特指) (全国卷)

(3) In the last five years that they’ve climbed churches, high buildings and television towers. (去掉 that，因此处的 in the last five years 为时间状语，其后无需用that) (全国卷)

(4) Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings. (去掉 the，因health 表泛指) (全国卷)

(5) Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill. (去掉 for，因其前的 get 是及物动词) (全国卷)

(6) Modern people know more about health, have better food, and to live in clearer surroundings. (去掉live 前的 to，因为 live 与其前的 know, have 并列) (全国卷)

(7) As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. (去掉 more，因为 longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受 more 修饰) (全国卷)

(8) …and let you to know when the book you want has returned (去掉 know 前的 to，因为其前有动词 let) (全国卷)

(9) …in other places where you are limited to a certain number, of that some may be novels. (去掉 where，in other places 在此为地点状语) (全国卷)

(10) If the book you will want is out, you may ask for it to be called back for you. (去掉 will) (全国卷)

(11) I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting. (去掉 about 或将 about 改为 that，因动词 knew 后可直接跟宾语从句，无需用介词) (全国卷)

(12) I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. (去掉 much，因 much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰形容词的比较级和最高级) (全国卷)

(13) I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together. (去掉 when 或将 when 改为 that，因这里的定语从句中的谓语动词(spent)缺宾语，故只能用关系代词 that或将其省略) (全国卷)

(14) I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon. (去掉 both。因 both 与后面的 two 意义重复，况且词序安排也不对) (全国卷)

(15) Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family. (去掉time，因first 已含有“次”的意思) (全国卷)

(16) In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. (去掉 in，在由 next, this, last 等词构成的时间短语中，一般可直接用作时间状语，无需加 in, on, at 这样的介词) (全国卷)

(17) First, let me tell you something more about myself.(去掉 more，因从上下文看，这是第一次给对方给信，不存在谈谈“更多情况”的问题) (全国卷)

(18) We practise for three times every week. (去掉 for，在表示频率的名词前通常不加介词) (全国卷) (19) Now I can’t watch much television, but a few years ago… (去掉 much，因为从下文看作者现在根本就不看电视) (全国卷)

(20) I was used to watch it every night. (去掉 was，因 used to do sth 是固定表达，意为“过去常常做……”) (全国卷)

(21) I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (去掉 all，因 all 与 whole 语义重复) (北京春季卷)

(22) So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. (去掉 in，因 this time 可直接用时间作状语) (北京春季卷)

(23) Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. (去掉 a，catch sight of是习语，意为“看见、瞥见”) (全国卷)

(24) Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (去掉 often，因句中的whenever 与 often 意义重复) (全国卷)

(25) For example, when I was a child, the rain was a mystery(奥秘). (去掉 the，rain 在此表泛指) (北京春季卷) (26) …in any other words, I am an only child. (去掉 any，因 in other words 为固定短语，意思是“换句话说”) (全国卷)

(27) …but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. (去掉 about，因 about 后没有宾语，about 属多余) (全国卷)

(28) For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put it in a secret place where I couldn’t find. (where 改为that / which，或去掉 where，I couldn’t find 为修饰 place 的定语从句，其前用关系代词，也可省略) (北京春季卷)

(29) For instance, on one night he played strong and loud music till four o’clock in the morning. (去掉 on，因 one night 可直接用作时间状语) (北京春季卷)

(30) The time passes quickly. Evening came down. (去掉 down，要表示“夜幕降临”，直接说 Evening came 即可) (全国卷)

(31) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉 at，the moment 在此用作连词，相当于 as soon as) (全国卷)

(32) His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. (去掉 in，spend 是及物动词，其后可直接跟名词作宾语) (安徽春季卷)

(33) Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (去掉 be，因它与其后的动词 develop 相冲突) (北京春季卷)

(34) …to make children to want things that they don’t really need.(去掉 want 前的 to，因为 want…在此用作使役动词 make 的宾语补足语) (年北京春季卷)

(35) The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese… (去掉 in，was 后是一个由 that 引导的宾语从句，in 是多余的) (全国卷)

(36) I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. (去掉 should，因 put 和 followed 是平行结构，作并列谓语) (全国卷)

(37) When I was a boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. (去掉 when，根据句

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