四级作文复习大全(3)

给朋友的书信中则要使用非正式的语言，主要是一些缩略形式和口语表达法。 【例1】 （正式语言） Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to you just to tell you how very much I appreciate the warm welcome you extended to my wife when she visited your country last week.

The help and advice you gave her, and the introduction you arranged for her, have resulted in a number of very useful meetings and I should like you to know how very grateful I am for all you have done to make them possible.

I realize the value of time to a busy person like you and this makes me all the more appreciative of the time you so generously gave to her.

Yours Sincerely, Michael Jackson

【例2】 （非正式语言）

Dear Danny, How are you getting on I Harvard? I hope everything is going well and you are enjoying studies. I am writing to ask you for some information as I am planning to come and study in the U.S. next year. I have applied to Harvard to take the course in Finance.

Could you tell me what I have to do to obtain a study visa and how long it will take? The university said that I also have to take out insurance before I come to the U.S.. How do I do this? I’d be grateful if you could give me this information. I would also be thankful if you could tell me what I should bring with me, for example, clothes, books, or anything else I cannot get in the U.S..

I am sure that studying in a college overseas has not been without at least some problems with you. Adapting to a new culture and environment was probably also a tough job. Have you had any problems that I should watch out for? I’d appreciate any advice you can give me.

● 写作步骤 1. 分析问题

首先应该看清题目，找出主题，这一步骤是必不可少的。然后，通过题目了解写信对象是谁，从而决定你写信时的语气。接着，还应该对写信目的做出判断。

2. 确定基本框架

3. 正式写作过程——按提纲写作 4. 修改成文

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Many thanks.

Best regards, Bob

三、书信写作范文解析 范文（一） Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition

on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容

应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

January 12th, 2002

Dear Mr. President, I am a sophomore majoring I Civic Engineering. I am writing to you to say something about the canteen service on campus.

On the whole, students are somewhat satisfied with the canteen service. For one thing, the canteen is beautifully decorated, clean, bright and spacious, which definitely impresses students at first sight, thus making it a pleasant place for students to have dinner in. For another, the canteen staff are always friendly, fairly enthusiastic and willing to help students. Once one student fell on the ground and got seriously injured, and several members of staff took him to hospital without the slightest hesitation. There, however, do exist some problems that require solving. In the first place, what students are most concerned about is the prices of dishes as most of students are largely dependent on their parents in terms of daily expenses. The comparatively high price is the biggest barrier to students having a delicious meal with sufficient nutrition, which surely will contribute to our ineffectiveness in our studies. Thus it is advisable that the canteen should cut down on the price so as to guarantee that every student can afford a delectable and nutritious diet. In the second place, some students complain that there is hardly any diversity in dishes. In this case, students’ appetite is spoiled.. sometimes, they would rather have some bread than the same dishes in the canteen. It would be desirable that more variety should be added to dishes.

Students live on campus and the school is referred to as their home. Therefore, it is important that the school should be made a comfortable place where students can enjoy a happy life and acquire much knowledge. We students look forward to a day when we will have a delicious food at a reasonable price.

Yours, Li Ming

范文（二） （CET4/6 2001.6） For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter suppose

you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is

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Directions:

going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 120 words according to the suggestions given (in Chinese) below: 1． 表示欢迎

2． 提出度假安排的建议 3． 提醒应注意的事项

June 23, 2001

Dear Xiao Wang,

Words failed me to express my excitement when I learned that you would like to spend your holiday together with me. It has been three years since we graduated from high school. I miss you so much that I even can’t wait to see you. Now that it will be the first time you visit Beijing, I am sure that your journey will be exciting, rewarding and full of a lot of fun. I’ve made a rough plan for this holiday as follows. On the first day you arrive here, I will show you around our new campus. Especially, I will take you to visit our newly-built modern library. During the second three days, we’d better go sightseeing around Beijing. We can visit some famous scenic spots and historical sites, such as Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, etc. On the fifth day, we can visit the Beijing Zoo, since you are quite interested in wild animals. The next day, we can do some shopping. There are many splendid markets and plazas in Beijing. On the last day, you can have a good rest before setting off. If there is anything inconvenient for you in this plan, please let me know immediately. By the way, since lots of people will go traveling in this holiday, it must be crowded on the train. So you should take care of your luggage. Bring more clothes with you because Beijing is much colder than Kunming at this time. And don’t forget to tell me when you will arrive so that I’ll pick you up at the airport.

I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a good journey.

Yours,

Zhang Ying

一、 对立观点型论说文

点明文章主题的常用句式

1. … has become a hot topic among people recently. Opinions vary from

person to person.

2. There is an argument / much disagreement / no consensus of opinions among people

concerning / over / as to / on…

3. Nowadays, people are divided on the question as to whether… 4. Different people have different views / perspectives on…

5. When being asked about…different people will offer different answers.

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6. There is a public debate / discussion / controversy today about the problem of… 7. The issue of whether or not…has been widely argued / debated currently. 具体介绍两种对立观点的常用句式

1. Some people suggest / maintain / hold the opinion that…But / However / While /

Nevertheless / Yet other people hold a different point of view… 2. Some people are inclined to think that… One the contrary / In contrast, there are still many

people who won’t agree, and they claim… 3. When it comes to… some people think / believe that… while others argue / claim that the opposite / reverse is true.

4. Those who criticize / oppose to / object to… argue that… But people who advocate / favor…, on the other hand, maintain / assert that…

5. Now it is commonly / generally / widely / universally thought / accepted / believed / held

that… But I wonder / doubt whether… 6. To the general public / popular mind, … But despite / in spite of / … I still believe… 7. Nowadays, an overwhelming majority of people think that… Nevertheless, there are still

some people of the opinion that… 陈述自己观点的常用句式

1. For my part / As to me / As far as I am concerned, I’d like to agree to the former / my favor

goes to the first view.

2. I agree to the latter opinion to some extent. 3. I’m in favor of… / I’m on the side of…

4. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we… we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision.

5. There is probably some truth in both arguments / statements, but…

二、 问题解决型论说文

引出话题的常用句式

1. Nowadays, … has become a problem we have to face.

2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem…

3. Although… has brought convenience to us, many people have begun to realize that it is the

source of trouble as well.

4. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of … has drawn / aroused / captured worldwide

attention. 5. Recently, the issue / problem / question of … has been brought into focus / brought to public attention / posed among public attention.

6. In recent years, many cities / nations / people have been faced / troubled with the serious problem of…

7. With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are

brought to our attention. 8. Nowadays more and more people come to realize / be aware of the importance of…

9. Thanks to China’s reform and opening-up policy, the past two decades have witnessed great

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economic development and social transformation.

10. With the rapid / amazing / fantastic development / growth / improvement of economy, great

changes have taken place in…

11. One of the urgent / pressing problems / issues we are confronted with is that…

12. It is undeniable / There is no denying the fact that… has become the utmost concern among people nowadays.

13. Once in a newspaper, I hit upon / came across a report that… 分析原因的常用句式

1. Here are many / several / a number of / a variety of reasons for it. First… Second…

Finally… 2. The reasons can be listed as follows. For one thing,… For another…

3. What has possibly contributed to this problem? In the first place… In the second place… 4. Perhaps the main / primary / most important reason is … 5. … is also / partly / solely / chiefly responsible for the problem.

6. It is no easy job to identify the reasons for … which involves several complicated factors.

For some… For others…

7. One may trace / attribute / owe / this problem to …

8. A number of factors could account for / lead to / contribute to / result in / be conductive to … 9. This problem may result from / be attributable to / be largely due to / stem from a combination of factors.

10. The explanation for this phenomenon involves many complex reasons. For one thing … For

another… 11. Some people may think that … is to blame for this problem, but its causes go still / far

deeper. 12. It will exert a far-reaching / profound impact / influence / effect on … 13. Admittedly, it may create / give rise to / bring about a host of problems. 14. There are a variety of reasons for this phenomenon. 提出解决方案的常用句式

1. The first key factor to solve this problem is … Another key factor is … 2. People have found many solutions / approaches to dealing with this problem.

3. We can figure out many ways to relieve the present crisis.

4. Then, how should we solve this problem? Here are some suggestions, which may be of some

help.

5. Faced with …, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.

6. It is high time that … Here are a few examples of some of the measures that might be taken immediately.

7. Obviously, if we ignore / are blind to this problem, the chances are that / it is most likely that

/ there is every chance that … will be put in jeopardy. 8. We need to take afresh / clear look at this matter / situation in a new perspective / from a

wider standpoint. Otherwise, we won’t come anywhere near solving it.

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