【小东教育】雅思测试4(6)

? the third key industry

表示趋势 Expressing tendency ? become the dominant? ? remain strong

? continue to grow continue to decrease 描写变化 Describing changes ? become?

? increased slightly ? reached almost? ? dramatic increase ? fall slightly ? dropped

范文亮点（Sample highlights）

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第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼，在范文中，原题里的 gives information about?变为 illustrates the performance of?，原题里的 main export 变为 primary export，并用 indicates 引出 future projections，这一系列的动词和形容词转换非常出色，既保留了原意，又提高了词汇等级。第 2 段：主体段一

描写旅游业 2000-2025 年的出口额，并进行了相关比较。根据数据（According to the data），旅游业占有统治地位（dominant industry），奶制品紧随其次。在 2000 年，旅游业获得最多的出口额（the greatest exports earner），达到超过 80 亿并小幅增长（increased slightly），在 2014 年几乎达到（reached almost）90 亿。据估计（It is estimated that?），旅游业出口额还会持续增长（continue to grow），到 2025 年可能会为国家收获约 100 亿份额。 第 3 段：主体二 段：主体二 段：主体二 段：主体二

描写奶制品 2000-2025 年的出口额。在 2000 年奶制品出口价值约 70 亿，但随即剧增（since then there has been a dramatic increase），2014 年的销量高达近 100 亿。专家预测（Experts are predicting that?），这一出口项目到 2025 年会轻微回落（fall slightly）至 95 亿左右。

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描写旅游业 2000-2025 年的出口额。肉制品是第三重要的出口产业（the third key industry），但是从

2000 年开始销量一直下滑（have dropped since?），今年为 55 亿，据推测，其出口份额在将来还会继续下降（continue to decrease）。 结语

这篇小作文结构合理，逻辑连贯，语言清晰，词汇的多样性是这篇范文的最大亮点。文中使用了不同词性的 earner, revenue, earn, worth, sales 来表达收入和出口额的概念；用 over, almost, around,

approximately 来表示数据的约数浮动，用 estimate, predict, expect 来描述未来预测，用词多样准确，非常值得考生学习借鉴。 TASK 2 TASK 2 TASK 2 TASK 2 TASK 2 审题要领（Task focus）

这道题属于大作文中的政府类话题。题干指出了一个社会现象，即“在有些国家，越来越多的人们由于吃了过多快餐而导致健康问题。因此，政府有必要提高这类食品的税收”。问考

生是否赞同这个观点。这是典型的辩证型题目。考生需要提出自己的观点，并给出恰当的理由来支撑自己的观点。

写作思路（Thinking before writing） 首先从观点上来讲，考生可以放开思路，先考虑自己是否比较赞同题目中让政府“增加税收”的方法，若认为比较可行，那就想想理由是什么；如果觉得这个想法没有道理，

那就需要讲出理由，同时给出自己的观点。辩证类题目一般的结构是开头先讨论题目，表达自己是否同意题目观点，然后用二或三个主体段给出理由，也可以写个让步段，最后结尾段总结全文，给出自己的观点。这篇范文分为四段，首段讨论了话题背景，引出下文；第二段从经济的角度进行讨论；第三段从消费主体的角度进行论证；结尾段总结全文，给出观点。 范文演示（Sample analysis） Model Response

The growth of the fast food industry has, without doubt, impacted on the eating habits and the health of many societies around the world. Diabetes, high cholesterol, heart and respiratory problems are all on the rise due to fatty and sugar rich food. However, the question is whether higher tax would improve this situation or not.

From an economic point of view, higher tax might seem sensible. In countries such as the USA, Australia and Britain, the healthcare system spends a large part of its budget on people with diet-related health problems. It could be argued that these people have caused their own illnesses because of their choice of food. In this case, why should they expect the state to pay for their treatment? The tax could help fund the healthcare system.

However, we also need to consider which socio-economic group consumes fast food as the main part of their diet. Statistics indicate that lower income groups eat more of this food than wealthier people. One possible reason for this is that fast food is far cheaper than fresh produce. This is because many governments offer large subsidies to farmers who provide products for the fast food industry, such as corn, wheat and beef. Fruit and vegetables, on the other hand, are not subsidised. Research suggests that many families simply cannot afford to buy healthy food or pay higher taxes on fast food. For them, fast food is not a choice but a necessity.

In conclusion, imposing a higher tax on fast food does not seem to be the answer. If the government chose to do this, it would only lead to greater poverty and families facing further hardship. (278 words)

词汇句型（Vocabulary and patterns） 与健康饮食相关的单词 ? diabetes ? consume ? income ? subsidies ? necessity ? poverty ? budget ? diet

? wealthier ? afford ? imposing ? hardship

与健康饮食相关的词组 ? fast food industry

? high cholesterol ? diet-related

? socio-economic group ? eating habits

? fatty and sugar rich food

? heart and respiratory problem ? fresh produce 高分句型

? ? has, without doubt, impacted on? ? the question is whether ? or not ? ? might seem sensible ? It could be argued that?

? why should they expect the state to? ? Statistics indicate that?

? One possible reason for this is that? ? Research suggests that? 范文亮点（Sample highlights）

第 1 段：讨论话题 段：讨论话题 段：讨论话题 段：讨论话题 引出下文 引出下文 引出下文

范文开头段先对话题进行了讨论，毫无疑问（without doubt），快餐业的增长（the growth of the fast food industry）影响了世界各地人们的健康和饮食习惯。接着用举例论证提出，由于摄入过多的高脂高

糖类食物（due to fatty and sugar rich food），糖尿病、高胆固醇、心脏和呼吸系统问题日益增多（all on the rise）。然而，要解决这个问题不在于是否需要提高税收。

最后一句用了“the question whether?would improve this situation or not”清晰的表达了自己的论调，生动的引出下文。第 2 段：主体段一 从经济角度来看（From an economic point of view），提高税收可能些道理（sensible）。在美国、澳大利亚和英国等国家，医疗保健系统大量的预算都花在（spends a large part of its budget on）与饮食相关的健康问题上（diet-related health problems）。有争议性的是（It could be argued that），的这些疾病的人们是源于他们自己对食物的选择。这样的话（In this case），他们为什么要期待政府来出医疗费呢？税收应该用于完善医疗保健系统（fund the healthcare system）。

这一段同样使用了几个国家的实例来进行论证，贴切有力。同时，还用“why should they expect the state to pay for their treatment?”的句型提出疑问，发人深思，情感表达也更强烈。 第 3 段：主体二 段：主体二 段：主体二 段：主体二

然而，我们还应考虑谁是快餐消费的主要社会经济群体（which socio-economic group consumes fast food as the main part of their diet）。数据显示（Statistics indicate that），较低收入人群比高收入者消费更多的快餐。一个很可能的原因就是快餐比新鲜食物要便宜。因为很多政府给予种植玉米、小麦、牛肉等快餐原料的农民经济补贴，相反，种植水果、蔬菜是没有补贴的。研究显示（Research suggests that），很多家庭就是买不起（simply cannot afford）健康食物或者为买快餐付更多的税。对于他们来说，快餐不是选择，而是必须的（not a choice but a necessity）。

数据论证是这一段最突出的亮点。＂Statistics indicate that?＂ 与“Research suggests that?＂并用，使论证更具说服力。

第４段：总结全文 第４段：总结全文 第４段：总结全文 第４段：总结全文 第４段：总结全文 第４段：总结全文 总而言之（In conclusion），对快餐食品强制增加税收并不是个办法（does not seem to be the answer）。如果政府这样做，那只能导致（it would only lead to）更严重的贫困（greater poverty），家庭会面临更大的困难（further hardship）。

最后一句“it would only”的虚拟语气用的很好，是结尾段比较常用的句型，用以引出后果或提出希望等。 结语

这篇范文结构比较新颖，并非辩证类作文传统的写法，段落内容安排生动，观点依旧清晰。举例和数据等论证法的使用贴切形象，充分有力。本文使用了大量的从句还有话题相关的词汇，可供考生积累素材。总的来说，这是一篇很有特色的文章，语言基调个性鲜明，非常建议考生模仿。 Test 4 K I N

PART 1 ART 1 ART 1 ART 1

In this part the examiner will ask the candidates some daily questions about their life, like school, hobbies and other familiar topics.

Topic 1: Hometown or city（家乡或城市） Question 1 What kind of place is your town/city? 解题思路

针对这道题目不难，可以从你们城市的生活方式，节奏快慢，民俗文化等角度作切入。 高分回答

The city I live in is a highly commercialized modern city, with variety of advanced facilities and infrastructure. Most of the families here are equipped with optical fiber, cable television and the like. Life in my city is comparatively convenient and fast-pacing. 精彩表达 ? commercialized 商业化的 ? optical fiber 光纤

? cable television 无限电视

Question 2 What’s the most interesting part of your town/city? 解题思路

一定要抓住这道题目的重点“interesting”,可以考虑从饮食，娱乐等方面着手。 高分回答 It is so fun to find out that diverse categories of food are available in the city where I live. The food ranges from native special offers such as sweet and sour spare ribs, to exotic cuisines such as steak. In addition, many of these restaurants list their menu on their website, through which customers can access the menu and put the order online. It does enable people to enjoy cuisines just at home. 精彩表达 ? be available 可获得的 ? exotic 异国的，外来的 ? cuisines 菜肴

Question 3 Has your town/city changed in any way in your life time? 解题思路 关键词为“change”,可以切入的角度有交通情况，基础设施等 高分回答

My city undergone dramatic changes in the past two decades. One of the most conspicuous change is that the public transportation system transformed from monotonous to diverse. People here used to commute by buses only, while nowadays people can select different transportation tools to reach their destinations such as metro, high-speed rail, Magnetic levitation train and so forth. 精彩表达

? dramatic 引人注目的 ? conspicuous 显著的

? monotonous 单调的，无变化的 ? commute 通勤

? magnetic levitation train 磁悬浮列车

Question 4 Would you say your town/city is a good place for young people to live? 解题思路 两面都可以说，如果说适合，就可以从教育体系、就业机会等入手；如果不合适，就可以从工作压力，生活节奏等入手 高分回答

In my view, I think my city is a perfect place for young people to live. First of all, it has an advanced educational system which provides young people with sophisticated teachers, materials and facilities. Also, it is comparatively easier for graduates to find a decent jobs in a well-developed job market in my city.

精彩表达

? sophisticated 精致的，富有经验的 ? decent 得体的，相当好的

Topic 2: Shopping（购物） Question 1 What kind of things do you prefer shopping for? 解题思路

可以说的种类很多，如：衣服、包包、日常用品等 高分回答

I would like to shop for commodities, which offers me great sense of satisfaction. You know, commodities includes varieties of goods like shampoos, mops and the like, which are usually sold in supermarket. Every time I finish purchasing commodities in supermarket, it seems that I have accomplished a great assignment, with such great amount of goods in my trolley. 精彩表达 ? commodity 日常用品

? sense of satisfaction 满足感 ? accomplish 完成

Question 2 In what kind of places do you like to go shopping? 解题思路

其实这道题是针对地点类型来问的，可以说的地点有很多，如 shopping mall, supermarket, online. 高分回答

I would like to shop online compared with shopping in physical stores, since shopping on the internet usually provide me with more options. Once I planned to buy an English grammar book. Information available on E-book shop not only show me more than 20 choices, but also illustrate the primary contents with comments of other users. That really simplify the process of selecting process. 精彩表达

? physical store 实体店 ? illustrate 阐明 ? simplify 简化

Question 3 What effect has online shopping had in your country? 解题思路 这是一个很俗的话题，可以从方便程度，消费习惯等作为切入点。 高分回答

Online shopping creates more opportunities for businesses as well as risks in my country. Due to the fever of online shopping, many businesses target at this virtual market, building up their own websites to compete for more market shares. However, online market, to some extent, erodes real market. Many consumers switch from online market to E-market because of its convenience and millions of options.

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